Reflection on FOA
Knowledge and Understanding of the texts and subject matter
-I felt that my understanding of my topic was superficial as I did not intrigue my audience with more than what was outlined on each slide of my powerpoint presentation. If I had more knowledge and ideas of my text, I would be able to go on much deeper to explain my points.
Understanding of how language is used
- As I presented on the topic of Manglish, I understood the colloquial "Manglish" however this did not go well with my idea of presenting in an Ellen Degeneres/talk show host style as I do not identify the speech style of a talk show host thoroughly and could not present it in that essence. I assume that my ideas were not fitting and was probably not focused as I felt that I had clumsily gone through one-third later into my presentation as I lost character while speaking.
However, I felt that my attempt on this idea was original and creative as recreating a specific style of a well-known talk show host would require familiarity with the style and simply a sense of spontaneity which always appear to be the basis of Ellen Degeneres' fun and friendly appeal.
Organisation
-My organisation of this oral presentation was rather simple as I followed a simple structure of background and main content. I also make sure my slides could relate to the next to ensure a continuous flow of thought.
Language
-I felt that I had good command in my English as I used a variety of lexicon and technical terms to explain the characteristics of "Manglish". Explaining these terms such a grammar, phonology, rhetoric and sarcasm allow me to understand them better as I teach as well.
My control in this area was something I was happy with as I was also able to capture Ellen's southern drawl and embody her sense of spontaneity in the beginning.
My control in this area was something I was happy with as I was also able to capture Ellen's southern drawl and embody her sense of spontaneity in the beginning.
This is a rather negative reflection of your performance Jo! When doing the reflection for FOA, consider the assessment criteria and how you feel you addressed it rather that what you think it lacked. So, for example, you could talk about how you chose a particular format for your organisation and the reasons for this. This will allow your audience to follow your thought processes in your planning. Have I shared the feedback form with you already?
ReplyDeleteHi miss! I followed the FOA reflection according to the scanned document you sent as reference for the FOA to us. Miss, I feel that I am addressing the criteria in terms of what I'm lacking, what else should I be mentioning aside from my weaknesses?
ReplyDeleteYou can talk about your achievements! ;p
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